Tuesday, March 2, 2010


Help I need to jump I said

How high

Came the reply

High enough

To kill my darlings

If you please

Said I


3 comments:

  1. I really like this. There's a beautiful staccato rhythm, an almost Dr Seuss-esque structure that makes it sing.

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  2. thank you! i am a huge dr suess fan so this is a big compliment!

    ps. apologies for replying to you here instead of getting ready to come out and see you IRL. i am so impressed that we met on a blog before we met in the world.

    now i can tell my mum that some people online arent pea does.

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  3. Ah, what if I proved her right? I need to find a baby, stat!

    ...

    Oh, God.

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